Conector
this week my job was the connector! The connector relates their real life to the story. When i was the connector I was able to make four connection. For example cousin Carl ray has very bad eating habit just like my cousin, she ate eight slices of pizza when she stayed over for the night. Another connection I made was that I had to do summer reading as well as Mary Lou did. Unfortunately i was able to another connection that is very sad, my friend’s mom died which was very sad and Mary’s neighbor died, both of the events were very sad and i wish it didn’t happen. Another connection i made that was very frustrating when it occurred was when my friend didn’t talk to me for a whole month because of what i said to her boyfriend, Beth Ann didn’t talk to Mary Lou for two whole months because of her boyfriend.
December 11th, 2006 at 2:44 pm
You made some good connections to what you read. I just wish you had proofread for spelling, capitalization and punctuation. You also could have made each connection into a new paragraph.