october 16th question
Why was Paul content to be backup goalie?
because he was Greatful for a spot on the team and goalies always get hert and he was the back up goalie.
What happened when Paul went in to the soccer game for Victor? What was Victor’s reaction?
Paul scored a goal and wene victor came back to the game when he was done getting his stitches he fell to his knees and stated his teammates high-fives, and when victor found out Paul was in for him and scored a goal he gave him a high-five too.
Why didn’t Maya need Mrs. Fisher’s encouragement?”
because she was going to make all-Country because she was really good and was one of the top scorer.
October 16th, 2006 at 2:13 pm
your blog was okay also you spelled “were” wrong
October 16th, 2006 at 2:14 pm
The thing that l liked about number one is that you supported your answer with discriptive details and used more informationt to support it. I really like how you repeated your question in the answers because then I don’t have to look back on the question and that made it more better. i think you did a good job.
October 16th, 2006 at 2:15 pm
Another thing to consider is to make shure you capitallized the title of
a book or a movie.
October 17th, 2006 at 1:57 pm
Hey celeste i think u can fix something becuaseu spelled hurt u spelled it hert and yea it was kindda rigth becuase it explained why i like it its was very good you would get it rigth exspet the hurt
October 17th, 2006 at 1:58 pm
I wonder about your answer for number two but it was really good and you use details form the story. Number three made sense about the question exsphelly when you mention that Maya was on the all-country soccor team.
October 17th, 2006 at 2:04 pm
i think i did a pretty good job and used a lot of details from the story!!!!8)
October 17th, 2006 at 2:10 pm
I like you said, how victor got stitches. It a very detailed sentence, great job!